Monday, March 5, 2018

Health Budgets | IELTS Writing Task 2


Question:

Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Answer:

The opinion of spending the money allocated for uncheap medical technology and procedurs towards health education will not be sure for people’s health.

Firstly, Agreement a large number of healty problems solved by health education might be a limited role. For instance, it is required to diagnose and perform medical procedures for patients who have got serious accidents. Moreover, some diseases such as cancers and strokes are not able to be avoided only by well-educated about preventive measures, then heart ailment and psychiatric which are heredity require high cost of treatment.

Secondly, despite how people are educated to continue awareness programmes through the media or training, people have an undisciplined habit regarding to stay away from unhealthy practices. The increasing of popular fast food can cause a wide range of life style diseases such blood pressure, cardiac problems and diabetes in particulatly among the young people. The importance of preventing against diseases  by educating people can be measured by treatment of people who are influenced by diseases.

On the other hand, in order to reduce spread of many epidemics like small pox, bird flu and other viral infections, people have been educated through health awareness programmes which have made great contributions to maintain healthy problems. To keep away from many common ailments, people are realised by the importance of having a hygienic environments. Therefore, Although certain areas are needed to be allocated fundsof healthcare, it should not be included on expensive medical technology and procedures.

In conclusion, allocating greater money to high cost of medical care is reasonable system.   

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