IELTS WRITING TASK 2 | (STUDENTS’ BEHAVIOUR)

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The main problem faced by schools throughout every single place is poor student behavior in particular in a poor country. Due to the fact that, it is often encountered certain sociological and psychological problems which affect the children’s growth. Not only parents but also teachers must take a responsible model in dealing with this issue effectively.

Taking numerous responsibilities by parents is crucial rather than other families’ needs because they are less attention and care. The requirement of good value and discipline in children’s early age can be instilled by parents’ role for much more attention, if those instructions cannot be implicated, the results would affect unruly behavior at home and environment-surrounded. For example, children spend too much time in front of television sets and computer screens. As a result, they lack interpersonal skills and social values, how children interact with their parents and relatives is a significant improvement in student behavior.

Moreover, providing children with a wide range of material comfort might make them selfish and greedy, this actually happens to family backgrounds which create many problems for teachers and classmates. Parents should take a responsible for spending quality time with their lovely children on regular activities. So, this can assist them to control children’s attitudes and share suitable advice if needed.

Various behavioral and psychological issues are other reasons for problematic behavior entire children because teachers lack effective training in dealing with children at school. Because of problematic or broken families, children have a tendency to create problems in school, which might be solved by trained teachers. I believe that this problem can be an effective treatment only if both parents and teachers are involved in appropriate ways for children’s development. Therefore, schools must be applicative to assist teachers in dealing with children’s problems.

To put in a conclusion, not only parents but teachers also should have the crucial role to maintain children’s behavior in schools. A great way of handling them with the problems can deal with effective treatment.      

           

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IELTS Writing Task 2 | NETT English

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

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The two pie charts compare a happiness survey between people under 30 and over. the overall data reveals how the survey’s results show a work achievement as the greatest percentage in both genders while other happiness causes in reverse.

According to the surveyed chart, the greatest achievement in working place is commonly felt as the main happiness life both aged 30 below and above 30 age groups by the surveyor’s percentage one in third per cent in each aged groups. Having hobbies is as the second high percentage of happiness life survey, 24% people say that over thirty ages do hobbies as their happiness while different then opposite aged group only 22%.

Interestingly, the importance of economic finance witnesses 20% on happiness survey by 30 aged groups. On the other side, other former is surveyed 18% for well-dressed. Compare to doing travelling which influences young adult’s happiness, this survey shows 15% whereas being with family is surveyed 14%, however, other causes affect both genders’ happiness under 15% each aged groups.

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W1 Pie Chart | Reasons Using By Bicycle and By Car

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Sample Answer:

The pie charts compare the percentage of some reasons why people cycle and drive to working place. Overall, it is commonly reason that, a car is used by mostly people because of comfortable reason while other reasons by using a bike are less air pollution and can be health and fit.  

The first basic reason is to use a bicycle, and bikers can feel health and fit. This reasonable view is the same percentage as causing less pollution about 30%. On the other hand, No parking problem and cost are there to motivate bikers cycling to work that show 15 % and 13 % while only 12 % which say is far faster than taking a car.

A closer looking at the second reason contrasts that, as the highest percentage, 40 % show that people are more likely to choose a car because they are comfortable if driving car to work while others consider regarding a distance as the second higher percentage taking 21 %. Moreover, drivers enjoy traveling because of faster than cycling as percentage as 14 % bringing their goods to office. Only one and ten percent are people regarding travel security by car.        

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